Making more sentences

When we finish writing stories in our books, we can go to the cupboard and choose an activity. We chose this one.

 We have to read lots of different words on tiles and see if we can make a sentence with them. We put them onto a tray and then read them to check they make sense. This is our sentence.

Soni and TK. 

Making interesting sentences

Once    upon    a    time   a   lazy    policeman    dived    happily  into   the   bath.       

Leitofiga

Bryan and Bobbie

Yesterday    we   saw   Bryan     and   Bobby    at     the  hall.      Bryan                was   a    policeman    and    bobby   was    a  police   dog.    I    went   with     Room    7.     Then       we      went   back    to    room    7       because     it    was   nearly     hometime.

Eirene

Yesterday  Bryan  and  Bobby  went  to   the  little  assembly  room.   Bryan   taught  us  to put our serial numbers on a website so we can remember them.  Bryan and Bobby were police.

Maria

Yesterday we       met    Bryan    and   Bobby   in   the  little  hall.  Bryan    and  Bobby  taught us about being  safe.

 Leitofiga     

Yesterday  Room 7   went  to see    Bryan  and  Bobby.  We went  on Friday  and we learnt about being safe.        

First we went  to the  hall and we waited Bryan and Bobby to come. Then they talked and talked and talked. Finally we went to the hall. We sat and waited for the police to come and talk to us all about safety.

Shaun

I went to the hall.

malachi

Yesterday I wemt to the hall and Bryan and Bobby came.

Dan.   

Yesterday      Bryan   and    Bobby     was      at    the    little     hall .     All    

the  classes      went    to       the   hall.    Room   7    went    to    the   hall    

too.    Mrs   S came   too.    It   was   fun.    We   learnt   about    serial    

numbers.  The    dog   was    talking  but   it   was  a    puppet.   It  was    fun.

Arjun…

Yesterday we went to Te  kahukura  

and  we saw   Bryan and Bobby.

Matt-Rameyo 

We are learning to use descriptive words

We are learning to use descriptive words and strong adjectives to make our stories more interesting to read.


Here are a few of the practice sentences we made up.

The creepy spider slid down the letterbox.

Her ancient father snores loudly in the house.

Theodora

Her    playful    spider    slid   down   the     letterbox.

Lynx

The creepy bird fell out of the letterbox.

Maria

Gosh! this is a creepy bird! 

What sort of bird did you imagine? 

The dog cleans loudly in front of the TV.

Lilliana Rose Time

The dog cleans loudly around the bed.

Dan

The  cat is chasing a mouse.

 The  shark is sitting in the sea. 

The crab is racing a ball.  

Aroha

The  dog   is  flying   in  the  sky.      

The  bee  is  showing   his  teeth. 

The   bird   is  hiding   in   his   house.    

The   stingray   is   going away.  

from   Lachlan   Room 7.  

The       bird     is     flying    in     the  sky.

The   crab    is     walking   sideways.  

The  mouse  is    swimming    in    the      sea.

Lynx