Writing

Stars- what are they?



We have been doing research into the universe and especially stars. We have been reading books, watching videos and searching the internet for key facts and information. These are the stories we wrote about what we found.


Stars     

They are dots of light at night. They are made of hot gas. They are far way from us. They get their own light. The air makes the star twinkle and the air changes. A galaxy is a group of stars. Our galaxy is called the Milky Way. Stars are called constellations. Matariki is 7 stars. They use stars to find their way. 


Lilly Time           




Stars

Stars are very hot because they are made out of hot gas. The stars are up in the sky and they re from far away. Stars can be hot. /stars can make their own light. Stars can disappear. Stars can be in groups called galaxies.

Leitofiga      




Stars

Stars are dots of light at night. They are made of fire. They are far away. The stars get their light from the sun. The stars are up in the sky. Stars twinkle because of the moving air.

Eternity Puea



Stars


Stars are big balls of fire and they are up high in the sky. They are fire in the sky so people can see them and the stars are suns. Our big sun is a star. Our galaxy is called the Milky Way. Stars are hot. Stars can not get out of the sky because the sun is a star. The stars can twinkle because the wind moves and changes them. 

Soni Hala


Stars

Stars are dots of light. Stars are hot gases and are too far away to see. Stars make their own light. Air makes the stars twinkle. Stars are suns. Stars that make a pattern are called constellations. Matariki is a constellation.

Arjun Singh





Stars

Stars are very hot because they have very hot gas and they get firelight from the moon. Stars are burning inside. Some are big and some are small and stars twinkle and they can burn you.

Shaun Mati





Stars



Stars are dots of light that shine in the night. They are like the sun. They are small because they are far away. Stars are far away. The stars are groups of galaxies and constellations.

Lily du Preez










Maui and the Sun



maui and his brothers felt the sun was going too fast and the brothers got angry. The brothers had a plan to capture the sun. The cut flax to make ropes to catch the sun. Maui went to the pit where the sun rises.Hi brothers built a wall to hide behind. Then the sun woke up. and the brothers threw the ropes. maui hit the sun with a magic jawbone The sun goes slow now.
Maria
How Maui slowed the sun

The sun was moving too fast in the sky. Maui made a plan to slow down the sun. They walked all day to the sun's home. Finally they got there. Maui shouted to his brothers, "Now throw the ropes. I will hit him!" At last the sun agreed He went more slowly. Maui was happy.

Lucy



Maui and the Sun

First the sun was going too fast. Then Maui and his friends cut flax to make some ropes to catch the sun. Next they ere behind the wall. After that the sun woke up. finally Maui hit the sun's nose. The the sun agreed to go slow.

Lachlan



Maui and the brothers felt the sun was going too fast. They got angry. They planned to catch the sun. They made ropes to catch the sun and make it go slow.

Eternity







The sun went down too fast. Maui made the sun go slow. they made magic ropes. they wanted to catch the sun. the sun was tired and weak.

Arseen





Our future


When I go to university I will be going to be a doctor. I am going to help people that are sick.



When i go to university I want to be an Art teacher. I want to be looking after children and teaching them how to paint.



When I go to university I am going to be a school teacher and I'm going to teach the little kids maths and respect and they will respect the teacher.





 When I go to university I will learn things to be a policeman. I am going to arrest people if they are naughty or bad.


When I go to university I am going to study to be a teacher.





When I go to university I want to be a teacher and I want to teach little children respect. I want to teach them Maths too.





When I go to university I am going to study how to be a fisherman. I will catch fish on a big boat.





When I go to university I am going to study to be a doctor and a teacher.



When I go to university I want to be a teacher and teach little children to get clever. I want to teach them everything and I want all the little children to be clever.


When i go to university I want to be a doctor. I am going to work in a hospital.




When i go to university I am going to learn about the stars and then sun. when I grow up I also want to drive a helicopter.




When I grow up I want to be a policeman. I want to catch all the bad people.


When I go to university I want to be a doctor and work very hard. I will read doctors books and check people's teeth.



When I go to university I will be a teacher and I will teach little people to learn maths and other things.


When I go to university I want to be a policeman.



When I go to university I want to be a teacher and work hard. I want to teach high school people.


When I go to university I am going to learn about being a doctor so I can take care of kids and adults.



When I go to university I am going to be an artist. I will go when I am thirteen.



Stories about St Patricks Day and leprechauns


Leprechaun are fairy people from Ireland. We learnt about them when we were studying St Patricks Day. some of us watched a video story about how leprechauns and their pot of gold.



Here are some of our stories.


The leprechaun gave the man a pot of gold.

Eirene



The little leprechaun went to a house to buy potatoes. He gave the girl a pot of gold.

T.K.

The leprechaun gave the pot of gold to the little girl and the man stole it. the gold turned into bees and chased the old man so he ran away. The little girl gave the gold back to the leprechauns.

Matt-Rameyo

He can see a little girl and a big pot of gold. The bad man saw the pot of gold. He wanted it.

Soni

The bad man took the gold from the girl. The gold turned into bees. the girl gave the gold back to the leprechauns.

Eternity


The little  leprechaun put the gold in his house and the man man stole the gold.

Jerome



The girl found the gold and gave it to the Bad man and the girl took it home.

Aroha.


The  little leprachaun  gave the little girl a pot of gold.  The mean man stole it. The gold turned turned into bees.

Aroha   


          





We wrote these stories about them.  First it is an egg.
Then it is a fish.
Finally he is a frog.

Jerome

2 comments:

  1. Well done Jerome. I like the way you were using the 'time words' to sequence your story.

    Mrs S

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